20/Feb/08

Belated, but at least I finished it.

So. Jared is a pervert, and Michael is very protective of his sister. What else have we learned today?

Maybe that I should avoid cramming too much dialog into a single page. Still, at least it speeds the pace up a bit.

There should only be a couple more pages before the end of chapter two.

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