17/Jul/07

The layout to this page is somewhat confusing. To a certain extent, this was deliberate--the characters are not exactly panicking, but there should be a sense of urgency to the scene. I think I realised I'd made it a bit too confusing when I noticed I had to put the speach bubbles that should be read later lower down because the panel layout didn't make it clear enough. Ah well, try again next time.

 

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